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I love the way I keep no secrets from you
Like a fountain, I poured out my heart
And I told you how scared and how unprepared
For you, my dear love, to depart.

With one hand, still firmly gripping the wheel,
The other grasped my shoulder tight.
And you told me (again) not to worry, and then
You told me that I was all right.

Then you said it's important to make and keep friends
Because without friends, you're nothing at all.
And you said, when I told you I could not approach you,
You said I could give you a call.

Yes, I am in love with you.
And I can now explain why.
It's because of your pure integrity
And the humor you have in your eyes.

It's the way you give me a long ride home
And talk about winter and stars
It's the way that you smile when I ask for a hug
And the way we embraced in your car.

I felt my own forehead upon your warm neck
I felt your heat there on my face.
I felt your hand glide down my back and my side
And your hair, as soft as fine lace.

We stayed there, submerged in that deep, gentle hold
Until finally my arms could break free,
And then you said goodnight as I slid out the door
And you smiled -- am I dreaming? -- at me.

I thanked you for always wiping my tears
And healing the worst of my pains...
but, my love, I can't help but be so, so afraid
That I never will see you again!
©2008-2010 ~willowghost
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Author's Comments

This is a story about a moment. A single, happy moment.
If I could, I would give this to the person to whom this poem is addressing.
It's very personal and I like it.

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:icondelilah-loveless:
I got goosebumbs when I read this :)

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"Just because the beauty of humanity fades, does not mean that it no longer exists"
:iconwillowghost:
oh my gosh!!
thanks for favoriting my work; i'm really touched that someone felt something when they read it.
:love:

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Listen to the Music of the Night
:iconfatfatmcfatty:
This made me sit and stare.
You grasped this moment so perfectly.
And like the first post, it gave me goosebumps.

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:iconwillowghost:
wow.
didn't know my simple writing could do that.

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Listen to the Music of the Night
:iconfatfatmcfatty:
So that's saying something, isn't it?

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:iconwillowghost:
guess so....

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Listen to the Music of the Night
:iconmurcielagov:
Wow...

There is so much feeling in this that it keeps you reading till the end...

It was great!
:iconhaxerbek:
was that amazing or what??
YUSH!
wow
you really grasped that moment perfectly and really made it come alive in my mind
I don't know how you could have made it any better
it was truly amazing

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The beginning is the most important part of the work~ Plato
:iconvaledhelven:
Fantastic! :clap: You have quite a gift...

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